All talk, no action.
Yeah yeah. You shuddup.
I'm having this problem with my story. The characters are yakkin way too much in my attempt to give some background. There's a lot of information to get across, and I haven't figured out too many other ways of making it clear to the reader. So I'm stuck. I have my story laid out, but need to interject some room in the middle. I think I'll quit for tonight and go pout with a novel.
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random thoughts...(f*ck i'm quoting Rolling Stone-- gags)
dreams or flashbacks work...
or just create another character who's not really a character (like the dead grandmother in Faulkner's As I Lay Dying) and have them tell the tale...could even put it in as a storyboard comic strip...or just tell it yourself plainly and simply in italics in between two comments...You are the Author and therefore Omniscient...
Hmmm. A story with encyclopedic references throughout. Hmmm...
I've thought of the three - I was hoping for a miracle.
footnotes! *bg*
NOTHING PROFOUND THIS WAY COMES.
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